[Kureiji Unit] MEP - Payphone

Track 1 : the pacing overall was nice but the it could be better to use another anime instead of Elfen Lied , something like "Saint Seiya- The Lost Canvas" would fit pretty much better i daresay , but the part overall doesn't have that much amount of errors

Track 2 : i have a feeling that it was used on both SV & AE since there's a frame blending in the whole part , besides that i couldn't really like the way it was done ( the MEP was basically supposed to have anime scenes not animated pictures with more or less rough cam movements from time to time )

Track 3 : the scenes selection doesn't look that good @ all & even the cc makes the quality of the part overall looks fucked up & add to it the spammed slides & zooms which gives it more continuity errors

Track 4 : i liked the way it was done tbh , ray never disappointed me in action editing overall xD counting on the lips sync in the beginning of the part with some cam movements to give a better impact from time to time was a good idea to me , nothing much to say about it , it might have some problems when it comes to the flames scenes usage ( it could be better if it was not used in huge numbers @ the beginning of the part & replace them by flame particular overlays ) + some spammed lights here & there , although the part looks good enough comparing to the rest

Track 5 : okay , the usage of Erased was totally outta the place to start with , & furthermore the camera movements spam gives it more continuity errors + the random effects usage , if u want my advice , a good vid must not necessary contain a shitload of transitions & effects & ugly cc usage which can't make the viewer focus on a single scene , a good edit could have no special effects most of the time but have a great timing / great scenes selection & a great pacing , it'd be better to take some risks by using some effects here & there but not by spamming there like a maniac

Track 6 : same thing as for the previous part & the same problems goes on until Track 9 ( kekkai sensen )

Track 9 : the part apparently contain a good mood presentation comparing to the previous part of urs as well as a more or less good presentation for the characters presentation , it have potential but it could be better ( @ the very least i can keep focus on some scenes )

Track 10 : the 3D text wasn't necessary @ all , + the kirito negative effect & some transitions here & there that they could be simply replaced by some film burn overlay or blur transitions , the fire overlays usage was spammed as well , even if it meant to be a material usage but it was totally bad , still there's some good passages between some scenes in the second half @ 2:04 to be more precise , it's where mistakes get lesser than in the whole mep i think

Track 11 : i wished if the beginning of the berserk part was better than that ( material usage to fill up the space ) but the rest was pretty nice ( starting the scenes selection after the typo usage ) , nothing much to say again , nice job

Track 12 : perfectly done !! , i daresay that it's the best part in the mep literally , nothing wrong with it , just maybe it could be better if it had some blur @ the beginning of every scene maybe ?? or else it's the best part indeed , keep it up !!

Track 13 : there's some spammed rotations @ the beginning of the part but it doesn't bother that much , there's some sort of a good representation of the characters overall , good scenes selection most of the time , nothing much to say , not bad @ all but it could be better

Track 14 : nice part , maybe some transitions was way too smooth here & there so they doesn't fit properly but still good , keep it up !!

Track 15 : good scenes selection overall , the text could be simply replaced by a scene or a mask